Dear teacher,
This postcard is a view of The Grand Canyon where we went on holiday three months ago.
We had a good time and we did a lot of activities during ten days. We took a plane from Illinois to Colorado and we stayed in a camping at the National Park of Grand Canyon.
We could see the Park from the sky, is a wonderfull view...We visited an Indian town by jeep and a tourist guide shew us the most important places. The rest of days we hiked on our own and we bought a lot of gifts.
Nevertheless we ate only sandwichs and drinks water.
Could you visit in this holidays...
Best wishes,
Esther, Lara and Eva.
1 comment:
(during) in ten days
IT is a...view (don't forget the subject)
(Shew) showed
The rest (of days)of the time
Sandwiches
You could visit it on your holidays
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